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2020-04-01 00:08

Overall its one of the best hunter x hunter fanfiction I have read. The only thing I can really comment on is that I wish there were more updates. But the story is so good I wouldn't mind waiting a few months to read a new chapter!

Rebirth in hunter x hunter

Adros99
4.2
9 Chs

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SeaVen
SeaVenLv5

This ia hilarious... i understand that in a special situation u can and u will spill ur secrets... but the MC do it all... he spilled the bean right away.. is that a trending to do when ur a reincarnated? Or transmigurated? To spill and tell on every one that u are one? This is a thrash fan fic... thats all...oh? Any retort?

5yr

AsuraGodking
AsuraGodkingLv14

•Super over the top OP MC. • Lack of creativity and research . • Lack of creative dialogue . •The story also just did a continues shunpo. •But hey I'm not a creative so I dont like to judge . You do you .

5yr
Endless_Clouds
Endless_CloudsLv5

The idea of ​​the plot is good, but in practice it seems that it did not work and the protagonist is very scrotal. Seriously, I think the author should do a more thorough and elaborate inspection on the protagonist and his interactions with the characters of the original anime. And try to improve it, if you, as author, also think that this is possible, and if you do not think it's possible, that's fine, disregard this comment and move on to the next.

5yr
Branching_Spirit
Branching_SpiritLv14

........ I think you should be more thorough in your writing, it’s like your skipping over everything.........................................………...................…..................................................................................

5yr
TheGreatDevourer
TheGreatDevourerLv5

The english is bad to say the least. The author has no apparent knowledge of the world he wants to portray. Stuff like gon and killua taking the exam when they're 10 instead of 12. Uvogin's strength has also been reduced so badly. Worst thing is that the author expects you all to know who the characters are. Taking no time to explain what they look like. I know it is a fan fiction, but it's not an unwelcome addition.

5yr
Domyip1998
Domyip1998Lv14

Overall i think its a good idea for a typical OP mc type fanfictions, the fact that its a HxH just makes its much better. One of the main issues i find is simply the lack of plot at this point, with having an mc this strong, its going to really difficult to write a good fight scene or any type of proper developement. Such as in the original HxH, we start learning about Gon's strength, speed, instinct, and personality through the exam and events occuring to reach the exam. Since this fanfic skipped all those, this mc simply feels like its answering questions like "what would happen if the sharingan is in HxH" or "what is someone can use a reality marble" rather then a story about a new character who has those power. Simply put, the mc doesnt matter in this story, he could be replaced by any other character you can find in any anime such as itachi and etc. In the end though, i do wish this fanfiction will continue since if polished, it can become an interesting novel with a world many dont try to write about (HxH). I honestly hope that in a momth or 2 i can come back and leave a much higher review, so good luck.

5yr
UchihaAshura
UchihaAshuraLv2

You are the best go to the highest place yoi can do it go man gg Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................................................

5yr
tomaz
tomazLv5

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Miyuri_CY
Miyuri_CYLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Gustavo_Silva_0811
Gustavo_Silva_0811Lv1

Muito interessante história espero por maus episódios 👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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