Review Detail of Immortal_Potato in Asura [Bleach]

Item: Asura [Bleach]
Rating: 2.2

Review detail

Immortal_PotatoLv64yrImmortal_Potato

I couldn’t really get that far because of the grammar. I mean I don’t know that much about the story but the grammar is really off putting. If the author put a little time into editing and polishing his work, then maybe more people would read it. Unfortunately, as it stands, it is a little unpalatable.

Asura [Bleach]

DemonDog

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DemonDogAuthorDemonDog

Hello! Could you give an example of what I'm doing wrong? I would appreciate it. English is not my first language so I would like to know to pay more attention to that in the future. Thanks.

4yr

yZinLv10yZin

Potato oq tu ta doing here I saw you in a novel that I forget the name ...... I remembered the name of the novel and something culture of chat group sla something like this ... just know that you say that your clan fall from space and right hit Mc

4yr