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Honestly this book is really good, has amazing potential and just hits the spot on some of my desires when imagining this genre. I hope that at some point you will go back and edit your work in the early chapters because before chapter 300 it takes an incredible amount of effort to push through the pain of the grammar and flow of the story to get that far. Otherwise, an amazing story and with a few touch ups could have a huge fanbase unfortunately those early chapters completely stonewall general readers. Good Luck with your work in the future.

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