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Feebling
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The story is interesting and has a lot of potential, yet I've decided to drop it since the Grammar is seriously REALLY BAD. Shame. - Writing quality 1 star.

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The Ultimate Host

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martialgod1125
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Thank you for the comment my brother is 15 years old wrote this story and is still learning the ends and outs of writing and being a writer and yes his grammar is super bad but hopefully, we get to see his grammar evolved its a good story but not my kind of novel though but I still have to support family

Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

Any harem in the story?

martialgod1125:Thank you for the comment my brother is 15 years old wrote this story and is still learning the ends and outs of writing and being a writer and yes his grammar is super bad but hopefully, we get to see his grammar evolved its a good story but not my kind of novel though but I still have to support family
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

no reply if this is harem or no???

martialgod1125:Thank you for the comment my brother is 15 years old wrote this story and is still learning the ends and outs of writing and being a writer and yes his grammar is super bad but hopefully, we get to see his grammar evolved its a good story but not my kind of novel though but I still have to support family
Chaos_Factory
Chaos_FactoryLv12Chaos_Factory

you should have him rewrite the older chapters if he can

martialgod1125:Thank you for the comment my brother is 15 years old wrote this story and is still learning the ends and outs of writing and being a writer and yes his grammar is super bad but hopefully, we get to see his grammar evolved its a good story but not my kind of novel though but I still have to support family