I will say that I am very interested in the worldbuilding of the story. It's probably the most intriguing aspect of it. I do think the dialogues could be better and delivered more smoothly. That said, there is big potential for the story to be way better than it is now. I have faith that the author can improve this series and make it peak. Good luck!
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