Review Detail of FryingDragoon in The Genesis Trilogy

A few minor errors here in there mostly when it comes to tenses and sentence structures. Nothing that can't be corrected easily though. I do admire the originality of the plot and I encourage author-san to dive deeper into the storyline and surprise me even more. It can be a bit confusing to understand the world at first but it gets clearer later on, due to author-san's efficient descriptions.