Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in The Arks

The name itself is already impressive. But let's see how the author succeeds in developing this idea? Interesting are the elements, magical, but why exactly fire - salamadras, water - mermaids, earth - an elephant, etc.? Is this somehow explained? In the Chinese system, at least the system is clear - the heavenly trunks (tree, fire, hemla, metal, water) and earthly branches (mouse, cow, tiger, hare, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chicken, dog, pig). The primary elements and their correspondences, and in your system, there is no such description. As a reader, this system of gradation is not clear to the reader, perhaps it would be worth creating an application and explaining all these subtleties, systems, building hierarchies, etc. in it. Akhaten? What it is? Why is this kind and what is famous? For now, to be honest, I do not quite understand who the main heroine is Valkyrie? The Dragon? Andromeda system? If there are descriptions of planetary systems, galaxies ???? Not yet understood! Strange, some kind of fun, wreak havoc in the village ?????? !!! Horror ... inhuman horror ... end of the fifth chapter ... Chapter 6 ... it’s not at all clear what this is about ... Something I do not quite capture the essence of the story ... some fragments ... some different magicians ... a spy ??? Which one Whose? What for? What planet ???? The reader is not at all aware of what kind of world it is, there are no descriptions of it, what kind of galaxy, what kind of planets are there in it, who populates them? No descriptions of the planets, who lives there, what lives ??? Just suddenly Andromeda appears in the text, the planet is one, then the other ... it’s not clear !!! Father of the church ??? Which one ??? I did not quite understand what was going on. The author has an interesting idea, but you need to work on the transitions of one story to another, to give a more detailed description of the world. Too many names, you start to get confused. Mages utter some words "activating their magic", what kind of language, although it sounds like - Latin. Writing Quality, I would rate it at 5. Stability of Updates - 5, you need to pay tribute to the author, that he can maintain a given pace in writing chapters, well done! Story Development - I would say between 3 and 4 stars. Not enough descriptions. Character Design - rather, 3 stars, characters not disclosed, their inner world is not shown, what they think about, what they aspire to, what they want ... World Background - alas ... there is no detailed description of it ... 2 or 3 ?? ?? But the novel has a potential, intriguing story, if to work out the details, the novel would have been more understandable and interesting. Thanks to the author for his hard work, it is always easier to criticize than to write yourself. To see the mistakes of another author is easier than their own. Well, this is a common practice in humans. respectfully