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Review Detail of _Kaitlin_ in The Dungeon

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_Kaitlin_
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Ok first off... what the actual FU€K is going on? It’s so fast paced I’m left as stunned as the MC of the book seems to be. Not to mention the grammar and capitalization errors I found. The paragraphs, if they can be called that, aren’t even more than a sentence usually. And even with thus strategy, the “chapters” are only five pages with my current font size and type. I mean, no wonder why ut seems thus book was dropped...

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Review it again i deleted all the old chapters