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2019-08-22 23:40

I don't even know where to begin with. The storyline is really good. I like how it starts and then slowly progresses. I like how the characters are drawn. You won't find much grammatical errors here except for a few typos but that's all. I just looovvvvveeeeeeeeee the story. Definitely will suggest reading this one.♥️👍 You are doing a good job author. Keep it up and best of luck for future.♥️♥️♥️

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