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2019-08-06 10:38

I really liked the way you have started the book. Synopsis and Prologue are interesting. Full marks for them. The thing which bugged me was grammar and especially the think you haven't ended the sentences with full stop! I mean this is the basic thing which we learn in language. Focus on your grammar and I am sure your book will get the needed attention. This book is full of potential. The only problem is silly grammatical mistakes.

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I will work on it, thanks for the review

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