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2019-07-18 19:28

Keep going, i love your fanfic ~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~~♥~

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KingGrizzly
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The story sounds not bad generally speaking and is probably good, but I don't like how the authors gonna make the MC so that's why I haven't, read a lot of the chapters. The author is planning to make the MC have a harem whilst also making it so that he is love-struck with Hope Mikaelson. There are three reasons why I don't think I'm gonna like this and giving up on it early. Reason number one is that I don't believe in the love that the MC is having right now so that's a major turn off for me. Number two is that the MC wants a harem whilst the author has said that the MC is gonna be love dumb for Hope, I'm not into harem stories but when I read them I expect the MC to love each girl equally so that none of them get hurt. The MC in his past life was pretty pathetic and delusional in his past life. In his past life apparently he only liked the girls on T.V. I'm not saying you can't have a celebrity crush, but it has also been stated that the MC hasn't really been attracted to other girls except for the ones on T.V. I feel like the author wants me to view as an unrequited love (it isn't an unrequited love cause the person he liked was a fictional character and the actress probably didn't even know who he is.) and instead makes the MC seem like a stalker. Sorry but stalker, pathetic MC aint my thing. Sorry, forgot to mention that I have a fourth reason why I don't like it so far. I'm team werewolf, not team ***** boy vampire. And yes I was team Jacob when I watched Twighlight and the fact that the vampire's sparkle in Twighlight didn't help me change my mind at all. I was a bit disappointed when the werewolves just transformed into giant wolves instead of a mix of human and werewolves like the ones in Hellsing or Skyrim. I think I'm gonna read some more cause it seems like it might not be as a bad as it seems but from what I have seen so far I highly doubt that. Anyway go and have a look for yourself cause everyone's different, I think I might just skip the romance part if possible, if not I'll see how it goes.

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