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Shiksha_Jerath
Shiksha_JerathLv55yr
2019-07-01 11:53

Since the author seems to be a newbie, I have given one extra star in each category. There are a few grammatical errors in the chapters that make for a jarring read but nothing that takes away from enjoying the read 馃檪 Maybe, the author can reread the chapters and edit them along the way and solve the problem. Anna seems to be forgotten things related to her father's death and that is the crux of the story which seems intriguing. Steven also is connected and concerned about what happened back then. As a reader, I can't wait to read how the story unfolds further...

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Jaycee1506
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Thank you Shiksha for the building comments! I'll review each chapter for a profound foundation :-)

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