I loved the first half of this story while there were some parts that were lacking in world development the character development was able to make up for it. Once the second part of the story started though certain aspects seemed to be completely rushed especially in terms of the ending romance with Lyrica. The author spent so much time showing that the Shiro actually felt dependent to the ML that the rushed romance with Lyrica just seemed rather odd it would have made more sense for Shiro to just end up with both of them at that point especially since Shiro showed absolutely no sign of having an attraction or romantic interest in Lyrica until the point that they get together. The first born of destruction concept while interesting felt more rushed and underdeveloped. The war with the gods that I was looking forward to was unsatisfying since Shiro was completely overpowered at this point. Overall the ending while complete was a bit unsatisfying but the potential up until that point made it a very enjoyable story to read.
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