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Baneofthedragon
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I've read upto chapter 39 and this are my views so far. 1. Great world buildup, the whole ancient technology turned vr is really good and the back intime thing too. 2. The mc's buildup is a little underwhleming considering he was one of the most powerful players is hard to believe given his choice in equipment and skills. 3. A good rpg gamer knows that although active skills are important, passive skills are a great boon especially in early and late stages, but so far with his low mp he ends up choosing all the active skills with really no passive boosts, at least mp regen skill or mana potions or something. 4. Before he died the mc used quite a few skills. Then you said that they could use skills in the real world. but then his mother gets into an accident and instead of using the skills from the game he decides money matters first, with the possible case of amnesia or even memory loss don't you think the mystical power of the skills would do better than modern medical means, also if they need certain conditions or lvls to use skills in real life you should have specified them early on. 5. Now the last, mc has a cheat weapon, it can gain lvls by 'devouring' other equipment, but instead of feeding every equipment you sell most why? since devouring basically any equipment gives it exp then super grind of equipment should have been the way to go. And the mc's constant fear of using better equipment is unfounded in my opinion. But anyway this are all purely my opinion and views and you are the writer and you can do anything you want, but im just laying it out there so that maybe it will help in your endeavours.

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Versatile: Alternate World

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Kyosei
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Thanks for the review now here are some explanations on some points of what you noticed. 1. I didn't properly explain the reason why he picks up active skills and ignores the passives but I added the reason why in the later chapters. Sorry about that. 2. Indeed, they can learn skills from the game to the real world. However, to do so, he needs to master the skill in the game and use it constantly. Remember that he came back from square one so he has to build up his body again to properly use those skills. This part is not yet on focus because it is set in later chapters due to certain future plot points. 3. Although he was one of the strongest players in the game before, he was a magic knight. That means almost all of his masteries are focused on the magic knight class. He is now a Versatile Class and he is trying to cope up with the other classes to properly use them based on what he knows on those mentioned classes. 4. As for the last point the reason is related to his side job, Blacksmithing. I can't say much anymore than that because I will be treading in spoilers territory. I know it is not perfect since this also has so many plotholes but I am trying to do my best to patch it up. I appreciate the review and thanks for taking the time to write it.

Baneofthedragon
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No probs and thanks for the info's cuz without those as you've said there were many plot holes that made no sense so with this i am at peace. Also its always refreshing to see an author who reads and comments reviews it means your dedicated to your work and its inspiring keep it up

Kyosei:Thanks for the review now here are some explanations on some points of what you noticed. 1. I didn't properly explain the reason why he picks up active skills and ignores the passives but I added the reason why in the later chapters. Sorry about that. 2. Indeed, they can learn skills from the game to the real world. However, to do so, he needs to master the skill in the game and use it constantly. Remember that he came back from square one so he has to build up his body again to properly use those skills. This part is not yet on focus because it is set in later chapters due to certain future plot points. 3. Although he was one of the strongest players in the game before, he was a magic knight. That means almost all of his masteries are focused on the magic knight class. He is now a Versatile Class and he is trying to cope up with the other classes to properly use them based on what he knows on those mentioned classes. 4. As for the last point the reason is related to his side job, Blacksmithing. I can't say much anymore than that because I will be treading in spoilers territory. I know it is not perfect since this also has so many plotholes but I am trying to do my best to patch it up. I appreciate the review and thanks for taking the time to write it.
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