Review Detail of Kyosei in Versatile: Alternate World

Hey, I think someone has stolen your story and published it online. https://***.amazon.com/Versatile-World-Ethan-Earther-ebook/dp/B08J2DM1RV/ You can submit a copyright claim as the author to get it taken down using the button at the bottom of the link left. Ramon

author, I just want to clear a doubt. the synopsis is awfully familiar with Guid Wars written by Kotario and another novel I cant remember the name. But the story really is similar or it is just the synopsis?

if you are talking about the turning back in time element of our novels, it is different and the story itself is different, it just sounds similar but it's not related at all. The process of their turning back in time is already a clear difference.

I see. Thanks for clarifying ^^ was really stumped there by the similarity. As long is not the same beginning and reason I'll give it a try haha. Thank you

Just don't abandoned us like the other writers did.

actually this novel was released way before guild wars .i am telling like 5-6 months before

I hope you will check my review, take it to heart and correct your mistakes.

Has BladeHeart finished the Quest of the Knight Lich King, yet????????

author, does this have romance or harem?

there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem

No harem awesome 👍 i will definitely give this a try. Hope you have some good character development with the female lead and make their romantic subplot somewhat realistic and believable. Anyways thanks for writing and hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍

will it be the same women ne was going to marry before

yo author have u decided on the romance part yet?

Despite the wedding no romance tag?

it's not harem right?

I stopped reading this a while ago, at 250 chapters or so, to let chapters pile up. I remembered the story as interesting, and since there are now 700 some chapters, I thought I'd dive back in. But I gotta say, your beginning is a mess. - people break in to his girlfriend's room, the day before his wedding and he wants to fight them to the death? Why? Who are they? What are they after? Nothing is explained, so it's irrelevant. - kidnapper calls, he runs to the rescue. There's a poorly described fight scene, and some reveals: his girlfriend fiancee set him up. Why? OMG, it's Kazuki! Who? Never heard of him. Why does this Kazuki want to kill him? No clue. No context, nothing explained, so who cares? - a syringe travels through time? And then you don't even say whether he uses it or what it does? - he travels back 1 year before the game, but doesn't go to see his deceased parents who are now alive during that whole year? Heartless, man. - the whole lining up scene doesn't work. I know you've changed it, but think about it. Who goes to Sony headquarters to buy the latest PlayStation? No one, because no corporation sells from the head office, (and btw, the laboratories wouldn't be there either,) they sell from stores or distribution points, for a whole bunch of reasons. If you want him to get the portable aka tattoo version, go with what someone already suggested, a draw. When he goes to the store/point of sale to pre-order his capsule, he's automatically entered into a draw for a "deluxe" upgrade. We already know that that old guy from Nexus knows who he is, so he arranges for the MC to win, and the girl is a true random draw. Of course they show up at laboratory at the same time to receive their "upgrade", so he meets her then. And that is just the first 3 chapters, and I haven't even mentioned the poor English with mixed tenses and redundant words. Mind you, I could handle that if your story made sense, which it doesn't right now. I am trying to remember why I thought it was worth coming back to this story. It could be that you do a better job as time goes on, but if that's the case, why is your edited beginning worse than it was before?

Can you addtge romance tag

Good. qell let's hope the op tag isn't fake and then I might enjoy this