Review Detail of Anima in If I were a Creator

Well there's a an improvement with his sentence structure but there's still some paragraph that are weird. For the story, I was just confused when Starcraft and Gate had a crossover. Most of the creation of entities where based on the real world (which is not a big issue) but I was more expecting of originality/creativity on the later entities, similar to the creation of Primordials. Also, I had a lot of times where I got confused when the creator is making/rearranging hierarchies. Overall, it may have many imperfections but I enjoyed it. Hope you improve and release more chapters.