Review Detail of BrabbitX in Reborn in DxD Re-uploaded

Item: Reborn in DxD Re-uploaded
Rating: 2

Review detail

BrabbitXLv53yrBrabbitX

4 Chapters in i had to give up on this. The grammar is too terrible, every single sentence is ****ed in the ass by an active chainsaw. Every single sentence has multiple grammatical errors. Present, future and past are all mixed up, sometimes many times in the same sentence.

Reborn in DxD Re-uploaded

commandergenerals

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commandergeneralsAuthorcommandergenerals

Welp, I appreciate your review.

3yr

BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

wish you said that you would do something about it. Like learn more english or smth.

commandergenerals:Welp, I appreciate your review.

3yr

commandergeneralsAuthorcommandergenerals

Yeah, I'm still trying my writing style.

BrabbitX:wish you said that you would do something about it. Like learn more english or smth.

3yr

BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

nice, good luck on that. The story was interesting.

commandergenerals:Yeah, I'm still trying my writing style.

3yr

commandergeneralsAuthorcommandergenerals

yeah, I have many plans on it and have a good day to you

BrabbitX:nice, good luck on that. The story was interesting.

3yr