As much as I hate to make an early review, it is just too short. Each chapter is too short that 3 to 4 chapters could only be considered as one chapter when you read it. Something that isn't really passable unless it is something like a prologue, epilogue or something along the lines. There's not much to say about storyline so far as a slice-of-life situation going on with a few supernatural stuff here and there, specially with the prologue long chapters that gets nowhere close to an actual situation to piece it up together to barely even get a feel on what is actually going on. So there's no need to discuss about that. Chances are: this is like others using the ranking strat or the author just pretty much lacking any motivation to type more and just leave it, giving it a feel of what looks more of someone making a summary rather than an essay as intended. (well, whatever reason goes) For now, I would leave it at an average of three stars. If the author can spend some more time to add more and lengthen each chapter without looking like half-done, it would be getting a better rating from me. As oppose to those who just give out high rates without a care of causing people to waste time because of a misreview.
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LIKEIf I may add for those who misunderstand me (again as usual), quality is not that bad. The whole issue would only be in chapter length. Making this novel have a far less and very short chapters to have not much of a story to "critique" and discuss on, which is why I said that it is too early to assess. This is mainy to point out the most crucial aspect that is the core of issue needing improvement.