I would love to give you a better rating because the idea of your book is great but you writing quality is not very good, chapter is short and some other things but I don't mean to put u down, just giving you some issues that u should work on.
commandergenerals
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LIKENo problem, after all I see how some comments are just plain cruel and they just want to make people have terrible day just like them, as an author u should have a lot of confidence and take in all the criticism and just improve yourself to rub it in the haters faces
commandergenerals:Thanks for pointing my flaws in writing. I appreciate it.