Review Detail of Jenjibread in Born Again

To be quite honest, this story initially read a lot more like a comprehensive Wiki to me. I personally never knew that much about the histories and cultures, and I enjoyed how you commented on which facts were true and which were not. However, I think the issue I had was more of with the integration of the facts into the story itself in the first few chapters. Since I am a fan of history, and I really enjoyed the efforts you put into worldbuilding, I had actually read past a few more chapters and found the dialogue and plotline to be much better later on. I think it was a bit wary in the beginning for me personally though since the information all seemed to come at me at once. Overall, great job!