Hi.. Author here.. I am new to this app and this is my first published book here which I uploaded fully yesterday. Please tell me what you think about it.
WearsMira
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LIKEIs there a need to explain a rape that clearly and annoy readers? What is the point she is saved, everything happened and you explained it too much in detail. Rape exp is horrific, majority of the readers usually like to see the leads chaste or its okay even if something happens, we might feel emotional but when such things are explained too much in detail, we get irritated. Especially its even more irritating when the author tries to say that the heroine is saved in the last moment before her virginity is taken kind of, when actually everything has happened and how could that be called saving Just because he did not enter his dick inside her. Mature scenes are good when happens in between leads. I have never seen a nearly raped scene explained in this detail and even posted as synopsis. I was thinking he is the lead in the beginning and thought there might be some reason or a misunderstanding etc.