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Item: New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
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Lame 😒 The beginning is good then comes hermoine. Well hermoine is not the ‘main’ problem if you think it clearly, but its the mc for making just a stupid choice. Also hes always saying he will not forget... well if you take it literally he really will not forget the mistakes he made, but not learning from it is not the same as not forgetting.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic

Fortunate_Soul

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Fortunate_SoulAuthorFortunate_Soul

Thanks for the critique. I've received the same complaint with many of my other readers and I now know what not to do. I hope you'll continue to read the story and continue giving me reviews and hope that I'll be able to improve my writing like that. Have a nice day :)

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