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At first, it was about M.C and reading this novel was really fun. Then the author added a little romance, which is necessary in a good novel. Now, it's about Hermione and only about her, but with a little politics here and there. Author over-explains everything about Hermione on every new chapter and about what Harry thinks about her every little action, like every little sneeze, every little sentence and it's very annoying. There was action in this novel in the beginning, there was adventure and exploring new magic and presenting the world in a different way. But now it's just some nonsense every chapter that I highly doubt anyone actually reads. Well I just skip most of it..

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New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic

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Okay. Thank you for bringing that to my notice. I take your suggestion and see what I can do in order to make the future chapters more interesting. Once again, thank you very much for the constructive criticism :)