Review Detail of Fortunate_Soul in New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic

Thanks

Thanks for this fabulous novel ankit

This novel is worthy of 5 stars

Great work..

Great work..

Harem really?-.- 4-5 girls tag along? Sigh ...

Nope. No harem in my book. At most there will be two girls in his life and I might change that to simply one as well.

Lol

Author, you can do whatever you want of course! If harem is what you'd like, then you write whatever you want... But since I'm seeing too many harems, or ones that are ruining stories by being forced I got frustrated, although since you're saying no harem, I'll read this! Good luck

thanks for this book

Man why did yoy drop your other novel??

Suggestion: In the initial part of the story you have portrayed Harry as a logical thinker + low EQ (who aligns in gray zone). But later on when he become friends with Hermoine or in his dealings with Headmaster you have shown him as some one who acts on impulse, emotional and some one who acts without clear plan. I see some conflicts in the character portrayal. Having inconsistency in characters behavior without clear logic would make the story inconsistent. Just try to keep this in mind as you proceed with the story

Hy i don’t want to tell you to do anything. I just want to know why you stopped with Path of Evolution, as I plan to pick up the world you built. I find it fantastic, so i don’t want to let it be forgotten.

Hey there friend. First of all, sorry for the delay in this this response. I should have replied to you at an earlier date but it just skipped my mind. So sorry about that. Second, I really wish I could give you a concrete reason for abandoning that fiction but I don't have one. It was just a combination of me not being consistent with writing and losing interest in the fiction. Third, if you want to pick up the story from where I left then you have my full support in that endeavor. Please give that story the ending that I couldn't give it. That's all I guess. Have a nice day :)

Thank you for responding at all to me. I know many who abandon something and then never want to be confronted with it as if it was their greatest sin. Second: I’m sorry to tell you but I won’t finish your story. No I thought It would be great to TRY a project in which multiple authors write the story of their survivor and in the end we combine it as a story of humanity. Especially the feature of the protagonist dying you created is so nice. It helps so much to make a story truly interesting. No Plot Armor. A book with no Plot armor, that is soo much potential I just couldn’t let it go. Bye and I will make sure Ashok won’t be forgotten.

Hy. I wanted to ask if you already had readied a system for the market later on for the high tier items and skills. (/also there exist that community leader System that Rahul used. You probably didn’t have concrete ideas for it. However I would like to know what were the borders of its power you thought about. [like how op can it get in late stage how good are early buffs for small time leaders]) And if you can still remember (and have time for me/not to annoyed by me) If you could share your background thoughts about it. P.s i already published my first 3k words at the moment of this request. (To Show I’m really dedicated not just to wast your time) P.p.s if you really would give more of your precious time for me maybe we could switch to discord for this kind of exchange.

Hy. I wanted to ask if you already had readied a system for the market later on for the high tier items and skills. (/also there exist that community leader System that Rahul used. You probably didn’t have concrete ideas for it. However I would like to know what were the borders of its power you thought about. [like how op can it get in late stage how good are early buffs for small time leaders]) And if you can still remember (and have time for me/not to annoyed by me) If you could share your background thoughts about it. P.s i already published my first 3k words at the moment of this request. (To Show I’m really dedicated not just to wast your time) P.p.s if you really would give more of your precious time for me maybe we could switch to discord for this kind of exchange.

Bro amazing book but dark, but amazing. Make MC save Daphne. Also make MC evil or whatever you want to do to him, but make him care for his girls's

Thanks for the compliment man. And yes, he will eventually save Daphne from her father but not immediately as he has some trust issues :)

Hello there friend. Once again, I'm really sorry for the late response. I'm a really lazy bastard, aren't I. Well then, let's get to your questions. So first question is how OP people could get in late stage? The answer would that they become 2 times powerful with each stage as their stats rise from 2 to 4 to 8 to 16 to 32 an so on. At the 10th stage, a human should be abotu 1024 times (about a thousand times) more powerful than a normal human and should be able to run at Supersonic level speed and be able to topple large buildings with a single punch. Also, the story behind the 'Shepherd' group is than anyone who has reincarnated for more than 3 times can't reach beyond the 9th leve. Like ever again. So they need someone with new blood (like our MC) to reach the 10th level for them as this whole bloodbath would only stop if someone reaches the 10th level. The ending of the story is something like this:- Humanity has involved a great deal in million of years and now they're facing a different race and are at war with that alien race. And they're losing because their bodies are weaker than that race. Because of this, one of the leading scientist is given the permission to create the perfect human specimen who would be far more powerful than the normal humans. If the scientist succeeds in creating this Perfect super human then they would copy it's genes and give it to every human in existance across the galaxies. Sot he scientist tried to create such Super Humans in a lab but failed time and time again. The process of increasing a human's genes to the next level (with the black fog) is very painful and most humans die in the 6th or 7th level. At last, he realized that such 10th level Super Human could only be formed in real life situations where they have the incentive to fight for their life which was why they created a simulated world where people would have zombies like creatures and would have to get more powerful in order to live. In the end of the story, our MC becomes the 10th level super human. But he becomes too powerful for the scients to control at that point as even their strongest weapon couldn't bring him down. So he takes their spaceships and escapes with the remaining survivors including his sister and elder brother. I'll also read your book next and see if I'm able to give any reviews on it. As for the Discord, sorry but I have never used it before. But you could email me any of your questions if you like and I'll try my best to send back a reply as soon as possible. (Though I'm a lazy guy so don't expect super fast responses). My email id is- ankitmahat@gmail.com Hope this helps and have a nice day :)