I think it started out pretty well, despite the unsatisfactory writing. The names in the story got muddled a couple of times and that’s what throws the story for me, along with the grammar mistakes. I like the suspense and mystery that gets unravelled in the end, but that wasn’t enough to push me to want to read it. I did finish the story, just because I don’t want to leave it half read, and the ending’s pretty okay.
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