the development of story is unsteady. everything is happening way too fast. the coincidence is too much. like Aristotle said, 'probable impossibility is to be preferred to a non-convensing possibility'. unconvincing possibility over convensing impossibility. there are way too many plat holes. still, it's interesting and could have been much better đ
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