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2020-10-10 13:01

This story has a lot of potential. It is the typical Asian/Chinese background story so I'm familiar with the uberly rich, powerful, and beautiful characters in the story...I'm also aware of the exaggerations and cliches typical of this kind of story...the perfect ML and FL...most male characters fawning over the FL...violence and hatred from various villains...the usual you and me against the world conflicts... BUT i live for this kind of story, because the reason why i read is to escape my own reality...here i read about a beautiful and confident woman, loved by the perfect man...they have all the luxuries in the world...fighting against all odds...yada yada yada... I just really hope the author can do something about the translations and sentence constructions...I CAN OFFER MY SERVICES, if the author wants to...it's one of the things i do... Do give this a try...it's entertaining for sure, although there's more room for improvement. Keep writing dear author ❤

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This story has a lot of potential. It is the typical Asian/Chinese background story so I'm familiar with the uberly rich, powerful, and beautiful characters in the story...I'm also aware of the exaggerations and cliches typical of this kind of story...the perfect ML and FL...most male characters fawning over the FL...violence and hatred from various villains...the usual you and me against the world conflicts... BUT i live for this kind of story, because the reason why i read is to escape my own reality...here i read about a beautiful and confident woman, loved by the perfect man...they have all the luxuries in the world...fighting against all odds...yada yada yada... I just really hope the author can do something about the translations and sentence constructions...I CAN OFFER MY SERVICES, if the author wants to...it's one of the things i do... Do give this a try...it's entertaining for sure, although there's more room for improvement. Keep writing dear author ❤

TrishaCK123
TrishaCK123Lv13

This story has a lot of potential. It is the typical Asian/Chinese background story so I'm familiar with the uberly rich, powerful, and beautiful characters in the story...I'm also aware of the exaggerations and cliches typical of this kind of story...the perfect ML and FL...most male characters fawning over the FL...violence and hatred from various villains...the usual you and me against the world conflicts... BUT i live for this kind of story, because the reason why i read is to escape my own reality...here i read about a beautiful and confident woman, loved by the perfect man...they have all the luxuries in the world...fighting against all odds...yada yada yada... I just really hope the author can do something about the translations and sentence constructions...I CAN OFFER MY SERVICES, if the author wants to...it's one of the things i do... Do give this a try...it's entertaining for sure, although there's more room for improvement. Keep writing dear author ❤

TrishaCK123:This story has a lot of potential. It is the typical Asian/Chinese background story so I'm familiar with the uberly rich, powerful, and beautiful characters in the story...I'm also aware of the exaggerations and cliches typical of this kind of story...the perfect ML and FL...most male characters fawning over the FL...violence and hatred from various villains...the usual you and me against the world conflicts... BUT i live for this kind of story, because the reason why i read is to escape my own reality...here i read about a beautiful and confident woman, loved by the perfect man...they have all the luxuries in the world...fighting against all odds...yada yada yada... I just really hope the author can do something about the translations and sentence constructions...I CAN OFFER MY SERVICES, if the author wants to...it's one of the things i do... Do give this a try...it's entertaining for sure, although there's more room for improvement. Keep writing dear author ❤
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