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Pretty good story. Not much I can say but that I hope the updates can be faster. The grammar is amazing and doesnt feel like im reading a different language (most books on this site have such bad english, I sometimes feel that I am reading a book in a different language) xD . One of my pet peeves is bad grammar, so for all of you who can relate, this book will not let you down. If u like xianxia/game elements this book might just be for you, if not im sorry you might not like it.