Review Detail of ATCkit in King of Harem: Beautiful Ladies Everywhere
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The stories are not that bad, but your grammar is. Examples are: "What do you have mind?" "John the lead they way" That's just from the first quarter of the chapter. This is a problem in your other work as well. However, I overlooked it because I enjoy the story and its tolerable when compared to other stories I like that I just can't stand to read because its grammar is just so horrible for instance The supreme sovereign system. anyway if I where you, I would stick to the one story for now and work on your grammar. that or get better at editing I find it helps if you use a text to speech program for this part considering its easy to miss most of these little but many mistakes of yours. the new book that your working on here looks alright, but the genre is saturated with a ton of new works that focus primarily on sex like it. whereas when it comes to zombies your already in and there's less new blood. not to mention you're currently listed as the fourth most popular zombie tagged series right now and that's including translated works, here's the list of your competitors when it comes to zombies; Doomsday-Pillars Mutagen here's the list for sex: Dual Cultivation - currently ＃16 on Originals' Power Ranking Profane Prince of Domination - ＃17 on Originals' Power Ranking The Sinful Life of The Emperor - crap but lots of readers The Hentai System - up and coming God Of Lust The Super Sex System Harem of Thrones - up and coming The path of the lustful demon System: Harry The Harem lord The Lust System My Mom in Another World DC Anime System A Goblin's Evolution Hentai God System Lewd System - possible reboot soon +18 - Harem Palace Sect's System - done updating but has a lot of readers DO FUTA No one has done that yet that or **** and BDSM with is only covered by Harry The Harem lord or dominatrix which is only covered by The Hentai System
King of Harem: Beautiful Ladies Everywhere
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lol idk how you got to that point in your reasoning I'm just pushing futa because the market under this genre is saturated and all the other subgenres are covered already but yay it is ultimately up to ApocalypseX and what he wants to write whether it has a following or not all depends on him in the end. if you should be accusing me of anything is trying to sway him into just sticking with Stronghold In The Apocalypse which is my actual objective. and ye I did come out of the left field with the last sentence but that was because I just spent 4 hours compiling all the information and looking all that up and I didn't want to spend more time on it
Yuri_is_Ntr:So from criticism you come straight for you fettishes,huh.Well,why don't you go and write another netorare story where first wife take all the girls with a dildo,and you can be her husband who treated as trash.Sounds good?
ATCkit:lol idk how you got to that point in your reasoning I'm just pushing futa because the market under this genre is saturated and all the other subgenres are covered already but yay it is ultimately up to ApocalypseX and what he wants to write whether it has a following or not all depends on him in the end. if you should be accusing me of anything is trying to sway him into just sticking with Stronghold In The Apocalypse which is my actual objective. and ye I did come out of the left field with the last sentence but that was because I just spent 4 hours compiling all the information and looking all that up and I didn't want to spend more time on it
Google it 😼 it's short for Futanari if your having problems Xp ps it was meant as a joke and it seems it didn't land
ApocalypseX:WTF is futa? Lol