Review Detail of atomjack111 in Reborn with the Ultimate Weapon!

I get where you're getting at. I made my system like this on purpose to kind of be "different" in a way compared to all the other system novels. Although some people may say the way the system reacts is a bit overboard, I don't necessarily think that's the case. Although the system is cruel and mean to the mc, that doesn't mean he's not helping him out. In later chapters you see that the system answers whatever questions the mc has with full honesty. The system is merely doing its job of guiding the mc so he he can get strong on his own without relying on the system too much. Although this is a "system" novel and a system is very important and is what makes mc's strong, the system isn't the main focus of this novel to be exact. The main focus would the be weapon that the mc has. It's called the Ultimate Weapon for a reason, not the Ultimate system. The system mainly acts as a way to help the user get stronger, and the stronger the mc gets, the easier itll be to unlock the systems functions. I'll even let you in on a little secret. The system acts this way for a reason, It's not just cruel for no reason. You'll find out what I mean in later chapters if you still continue to read this after writing this review.

I agree, I started reading it was really expecting a lot and had some hope for it, but the system immediately became a huge turn off for me, I have just decided to stop and drop it, I really came in with a lot of hope and the system has really disappointed me and ruined the story completely.

Crude and asshole systems are huge turnoffs, systems are tools for the mc, they have no right to have emotion or be anything more than a rulebound slave to the mc.

That's a really simple way to think about systems. Guess my novel wasn't to your liking.

Its the only real way of thinking about systems, any other type of system is not a system but a parasite.