Review Detail of Xelosphere in Reborn with the Ultimate Weapon!

Hello there! Author here! This is my first story and was inspired by many of the system novels out there mainly inspired by the original known as Endless Path Infinite Cosmos. I'll keep on releasing new updates and the such until I feel like this story is fully complete. I also try to do daily updates as much as possible. As my first story, I also require a lot of feedback so if you can/could a comment would always be nice in case something didn't make sense or the like. I plan to add a lot of different weapons and such from different manga and anime. As of right now I have 3 of the mc's weapons planned and plan on taking suggestions for the others. As always this story is subject to what you think. If you think this story has a lot of plot holes and isn't good then make sure to tell me (with constructive criticism, of course). Or if you think this story is absolutely perfect with minor missed details here and there also make sure to tell me. Any and all feedback will always be accepted by me! Hope you enjoy the story -Author