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Everton_Azevedo
Everton_AzevedoLv14yr
2020-10-28 22:49

Parabéns pela maravilhosa obra continue assim espero ansiosamente mais capítulos. Achei bem legal o fato de vc colocar o MC como alguém inteligente em vez de um Fan idiota

Spiderman New X (PT-BR)

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Ramikan_Imperador
Ramikan_ImperadorLv2

Oi Everton_Azevedo, será que você poderia dar uma olhada no meu livro: O Portal da Última Sombra. Preciso muito de algumas opiniões sobre a historia : ) Gênero: Fantasia, Aventura, Ação Sinopses: Um grupo de jovens bruxos, precisa impedir que um poderoso portal seja aberto, mas para isso, terão de encarar os demônios do Inferno em uma batalha fantástica cheia de aventuras, magia e mistérios. https://www.webnovel.com/book/o-portal-da-ultima-sombra_18845628205270305

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GunnerGod
GunnerGodLv14

Can you please try to translate this into english so that those of us who cannot read a different language can read your story to plz.i would be very much grateful if you could translate it into english.

5yr

Swayzs
SwayzsLv13

Eu estou realmente gostando dessa obra, a história esta muito boa, mas quero dar uma crítica construtiva sobre a gramática. Autor o seu português é bom mas muitas vezes você erra na acentuação e pontuação. Sobre a acentuação, em palavras mais complexas, não tem problema em não saber sempre, mas muitas vezes eu vejo o acento faltando na palavra "é" ou "até", o "é" posse ser confundido com "e" e isso atrapalha a leitura. Sobre a pontuação, o maior problema seria que algumas vezes você coloca um ponto de interrogação ou outro e continua na mesma frase só que com letra minuscula, tem que ficar ligado nisso. E tem mais uma coisa que eu não entendi o porque você faz isso, que é quando você aleatóriamente escreve uma palavra com a primeira letra maiúscula no meio da frase, sendo que não são nomes próprios. Bem, era isso, vou dar 5 estrelas para dar o help, mas fica ligado no que eu escrevi.

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CrowIey
CrowIeyLv4

Uma das melhores fanfics do site, se voce gosta do MCU e de isekai entao de uma chance a essa obra. r32897yh3928r7fyhfhr2q893rhfy92fh9hf9wfh9fh9w r32897yh3928r7fyhfhr2q893rhfy92fh9hf9wfh9fh9w r32897yh3928r7fyhfhr2q893rhfy92fh9hf9wfh9fh9w r32897yh3928r7fyhfhr2q893rhfy92fh9hf9wfh9fh9w

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Nurarihyon444
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Está história é incrível espero que continues . Uma Pergunta esta história tem romance .....................................................................................................................................

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Kaichen442
Kaichen442Lv6

Desistiu? A história estava indo muito bem. :/ . . . . . . . . . .xididididjejejeneejejdjdjdjdjhdjdjdjdjsjdjdjdjsjsjdjsjsjdjdjdjdjejsjdjdjsjdjdhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjjdjdjdjdjfjjfjdjdjfjfjcjfjfjcjcjcjcicjcicifjfjfudjdjdjfjxjdjcufufucuxufufufufjxjduxuxjfjfuffucu

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HelloDarkness07
HelloDarkness07Lv4

For Only English Readers, type the name of the book in google and click the WebNovel link, but open with the browser. Google translate extension helps a lot in understanding the book. I have read this book like that. And yes, it takes effort to understand a bit, as Google translate is not perfect, but you get the meaning pretty well. .........................................................................................................................................................................................

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chis_narmo
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Niceface
NicefaceLv5

Por favor eu preciso de mais, continua essa história pelo amor de Deus. O need more.Mano essa história está quase perfeita,falta só o interesse amoroso

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