Review Detail of don_offl in Endless Sun (deleted)

Holy this novel remembers me a choices game i played on mobile Elementalists i've always wanted a full time novel like that game other than harry potter books and ive finally found this. my author persona was punched down by my reader persona,even though the there are some techincal and some grammatical errors here and there one could simply ignore it and enjoy the novel pls resize the paragraphs to make it more smaller author i hate big chunk of para you have awesome story telling abilities and writing skills,ive learned a lot from readings and i need to read it again slowly to enjoy it bit more even the starting chapters seems like fillers it has a good flowing the only thing bothered me is the characters which seemes a little bland until chapter 7. i hope the characters get personalities and feel like real beings in the following chapters. Overall this novel brought my happy memories about fantasy games and books ive read and made me smile. Simply a Great novel