Item: LOST IN SPACE. A LitRPG Space Opera Adventure
Rating: 3.4
Author: ahdamnit

ahdamnitLv45yr

2019-08-11 07:31

Seems pretty generic, nothing really special about the story. Standard Russian author Russians are better than you crap. When the Russians win a tourney you are specifically reminded that the team is Russian. At least he hasn't yet started the USA bashing Russian Authors are so fond of. Gramatically it's pretty good for an non-English author, it has few errors that I noticed, most of which was poor word choice. The MC has no pride or spine. His team and Girlfriend betrays him and he takes her back immediately and completely forgives her after she kept their betrayal from him because she cares more about the game then him. Later he has to keep a secret from her for actually good reasons like fines, and while it isn't said probably jail time, and she doesn't forgive him. He gives in and sells his ship to his old team for money which he later says is what allowed them to win the tourney.

LOST IN SPACE. A LitRPG Space Opera Adventure

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