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Mcmrmammut
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2019-11-11 23:22

One of the worst novels Ive read. The positiv is the world description. Otherwise, complete and uther garbage. There really is no logic in the MC persona, after 6 chapters the ^world^ isntbreally described. The system isnt really a system with interaction, the MC just knows through the system. . The plot (if there really is one) is so full of holes you can drive a truck through it.

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esteelin27
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then why u write urself? i also a writer myself, not novel writer thou. i read lots of novel already. i think this novel is good enough

Mcmrmammut
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I read alot of Novels, some really good, some bad and some interesting while not good, and some just plain. I like system novels, but this is just so bad. I had hopes for it, but it was horrible and the only positive I could find was world description, otherwise uther garbage.

esteelin27:then why u write urself? i also a writer myself, not novel writer thou. i read lots of novel already. i think this novel is good enough
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