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Scarlettbunny
ScarlettbunnyLv114yrScarlettbunny

What a story! The first chapter was a little rocky, I had some doubts but my curiosity got the better if me then 10 chapters later, here I am! Perfect balance of mystery, magic, wtf? Moments and personal struggle. The plot is interesting, the characters are of different species co and beat part was k saw the twist coming! Can't find it from me but yes there are twists which makes reading the novel enjoyable. Only complaint was the lack of description of the characters. You only get bits and pieces, here and there and you have to try and figure out what you need to picture. Honestly ML to me is some emo kid that you would find in a corner or 'L' from death note if he was willing to walk outside while the FL in some white girl hiding away in a tattered, tan, hooded cloak. So that's my only complaint, what do your people look like?!?!?! I probably go it all wrong but I got almost nothing to work with here.

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The Life Of A Time Mage

Mavislin11

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Mavislin11
Mavislin11AuthorMavislin11

It's supposed to be like a spin off from my main book I'm currently working one. Thanks for the wonderful feedback though!

Mavislin11
Mavislin11AuthorMavislin11

Most of the characters are based on my real life peers, I'm not really sure on how to elaborate on that.

Scarlettbunny
ScarlettbunnyLv11Scarlettbunny

To start describe their looks. I base mine off of people I know and their personalities but it doesn't stop you from describing how they look. It's just you did it in small pieces here and there.

Mavislin11:Most of the characters are based on my real life peers, I'm not really sure on how to elaborate on that.