Not bad, except for the misspelled word here and there, it has a nice premise and easy to understand. The first few chaps alone is enough to get you hooked to the story. I'm not good with grammar myself but its easy to spot others mistake haha, so I will advise the author to scroll through the chapters all over and correct what needs to be corrected and I'm sure the book will do great, and you won't lose potential readers. I'm looking forward to read more, so I'm gonna keep reading, good luck on your story author.
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