Review Detail of ggone_ in Cancelled

As far as i’ve read, the book has been interesting so far! The synopsis has also gotten me hooked into the story. From where I stopped, I’m quite excited to see how the FL and ML’s relationship would develop along with their daughter. My only problem in the story is the grammar. There wasn’t major flaws but a bit of proofreading would help improve the story :) Kudos to the author and keep up the good work!