Review Detail of Miyasaru in An Eternity At Sea

I really enjoyed this story, from the narration to the plot I thought it was put together quite well. I personally felt it was a little too short for me to invest in any of the characters though, since it just takes a while for me to attach emotionally to a fictional character in general. (especially if it's set up to look like that i.e. a dystopian/thriller) The writing was good, granted a couple of typos and other minor things that can be a pain to edit with so many words coming into play. Overall I enjoyed this story and the setting it takes place in. There was one thing that stood out to me though, and that was Ace. He is such a baby personality and I love him with all my heart. We honestly need more screentime for him along with a more in-depth description of what he looks like and a back story.