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By the way if you reboot it like this .... then please consider to skip the part which you need to update like which harem the mc want to fill in because for me i want your idea and realistic on this novel you only update those Q and A when you stablized the story which is ... when the mc enter the part seems to be interested thats when you give Q and A if the potential harem should be enter the relationship with mc ..... and the part of reason you reboot this story because on xavier arc with mc .... cuz even if the mc saving the universe it cannot deny he's harem would be threatened ... what i want to say is .... don't make this novel too dark make it balance .... by balance you could write it without stress yourself and your reader .... think a head of time .... your story kinda interesting but the twist and plot make me kinda loss ....thats why by balance you could make try to cover those error .... i remove your novel from my library atm .... when you cover those error then i add it back .... we are fellow fanfic but you step ahead try to become author so take it as your experience to make your imigination wider good luck my brethrean XD

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