Item: The sacrifice
Rating: 3.4
Author: anon88

anon88Lv65yr

2019-06-04 03:40

This is a review of the first chapter. The story starts with a family of four moving back to the father’s home town. The two siblings are a girl who likes “creepy” things and a boy who did not want to leave his friends back at their former residence. Which sibling will be the main character is unknown. There is also flash forward will an ***** male running away in the dark. The story is well written, but one chapter is not long enough to determine if it will be scary.

The sacrifice

retardedscripter

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7 Chs

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retardedscripterAuthor

Thank you for the review! This means a lot to me! Even I am not sure if this will be scary or not. Since this is my first work, I'm still learning! And according to me, even if the story is not so scary I would want the story to have a strong concept and detailed work. And I'm actually focused on giving an impactful story. But of course I'll try my best to make sure the novel gets scary! Thanks a lot! Keep supporting!(◍•ᴗ•◍)

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