Review Detail of Elmer_Melendez in Dropped_1

So far after reading all the chapter, I’ve come to realize this novel has an awesome story and I like the fact that it incorporates two different stories. The only problem I have is the ability’s due to the fact that he has a good amount and some of the explanations are really lengthy and kinda confusing I was only able to understand some of it once the MC used it in combat l. Then a few grammar mistakes here and there but all in all I relate this story almost a perfect 10 out of 10, so I hope you keep up the good work and keep pumping this bitches out