Review Detail of ImmortalFeng in Bound to Soar across the sky

Guys check out this story and let me know if I should continue writing or not. Well I just started so you might find my writing very ******* style and trying to hard to write words or some words you may have difficulty in understanding if you are new to the Eastern Fantasy genre with cultivation bases. When it comes to weird names in the middle , just try and relating it to something funny. I'm gonna try and further improve my skills if you guys approve of my style of writing.