MC loves swearing way too much - is this a sign of writer being repressed irl? He is also pu$$y AF Scared of facing monsters he can one shot since he now has Saitama's body and powers Tldr MC is a good for nothing lil trash How unimpressive

A little disappointing for a story based on one punch man. Reads like one of those fan tics made by a 12 year old. Tsarck, I really expected more from you. P.S. Justifying every part we hate about your character by saying “oh well that’s what a geek/nerd would do” is so f*cking annoying. The novel isn’t terrible but every time I read that it puts a bad taste in my mouth. STOP SAYING THAT, LITERALLY OWN UP TO THE FACT THAT THIS IS ONE OF THOSE SELF INSERTS! The character is pretty disappointing btw.

This is extremly good(this is brilliant already because its a one punch man story) but dont you dare drop it👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Well hello people, my name's Tsarck and i'm here to tell you why you should or shouldn't read this novel.ag If you're not a fan of One Punch Man, or are a fan but don't know all that much things on One Punch Man, it's not for you. Most of the time i don't really introduce people that have already been introduced in the manga, and i don't explain things that only someone who read the manga can understand. Then again you can still read and try to understand, but be warned that the start of this novel will follow the canon of the manga. For all those who want to read a fanfic about a different Saitama, it's for you. Saitama is funny, Saitama is OP, but he's also dumb. There are many moments in the manga that made me angry at Saitama because of how dumb he could be. I mean seriously the mere fact that he doesn't even recognize a villain when he sees one proves how dumb he is. But don't worry! This Saitama will be different. He will be calmer, smarter but also colder. It always made me giggle to imagine what the world of One Punch Man would become if Saitama was a bit more serious and manipulative.......Well here it is! Of course Saitama won't be some cold asshole right at the beginning of the story.........But things are gonna get interesting, trust me =)

Writing quality is as average as it gets Stability of updates idk about but i saw it was somewhat stable. Story and Character design are both complete trash. The author doesn't understand anything about the one punch man universe and decides to make sh*t up World background isn't creative at all since its just a poor copy and paste plus wrong information about the one punch man world

The story is interesting, they should have more with that theme in this app / site. The author is not stuck in the original world but creates more history, regardless if it is not consistent in the original world, but this is not bad since it makes sense in the fanfiction

If you fan of opm-I suggest dont read it this. Author changing so much you are gonna get irritated. If you are gonna write fan-fiction- AT LEAST BE FAN, AUTHOR!

very good................................................................................................................................................................

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