Review Detail of Practitioner in A good system novel

Firstly, sorry for the awful English. Novel is very good, has a future, just have to revise, put some space between the sentences, and separate the lines correctly. As the world has not yet been created, I do not have much to evaluate, but I will give you 5, and according to Novel's progress, I will change the note. I hope future releases, have more than 800 words, thank you. : D