Really, a gem within trashes. I really gave up reading fanfictions on this site because people here only care about how cool the cheats and how many women mc can fk. (And also the ppl who complain about how the fanfic is not going the same way as cannon but who cares about them) As for the review, the start itself is unique one with no wishes, no systems and no absurd power up. Update is not as frequent as others . The story follows a story line different from others. Grammatically , i won't complain about this as I am not very proficient in that area as you can probably see in my review. Really, the story deserves more.

Please let Mc get water 💦 type logia devil fruit............................................................

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is this dropped please tell us if so i don't want to put more hope for nothing i was exciting when you said that you're stocking chapters but now i start to believe that you dropped by 60 %

go go go pls more more and gravity fruit pls with techniques from Fujitora Pain Deva Path abd bluenote ( last one is weak but take the ability black hole and make ut stronger like he can use it just like chubaku tensei send it toward the enemies and it start to suck everything inside it can got the potential to destroy an island as it suck everything inside and grow big until there is nothing just like chubaku tensei but the the latest don't suck things indisde but only attract things atound itself until it become a big meteor

high hope for the story overall it's great one (best one piece : marine) gotta say need to chose his devil fruit wisly look at the techniques devlopped by previous user and take the good ones and add motr strong techniques " paramecia is the best for techniques more as zoan don't need techniques cause he turn into creature with their instinctive abilities can't create morecfor them like marco sengoku more than what their fruit give they can't creat more as for logia gotta techniques but for the same use be it long range or close range that's why paramecia users got a lot of techniques for their fruits that would give them adventage

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Where is the update its been a month already .. update please... Where is the update its been a month already .. update please... Where is the update its been a month already .. update please... Where is the update its been a month already .. update please... Where is the update its been a month already .. update please...