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2019-06-02 02:16

The novel is still in her beginning stage, with barely any chapters, so whatever I say here might not be true in the future. It's hard for me to talk about story development or world background, since the novel just began. From what I saw till now, it's a standard cultivation novel, If somebody likes cultivation, then they probably won't hate this. Writing quality is okay. There are some mistakes, but it's readable. A little advice through, if you want to use '___' symbols, it's fine. Just don't use too much of them, and try to always put the same amount of them when you use them. Right now, sometimes it's added less, sometimes it’s added more, it just doesn't look good.

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Thank you for the short review. I will do my best to improve as best I can.

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