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ImmortalJohnnySins
ImmortalJohnnySinsLv145yr
2019-10-04 14:23

Not another one of them demon king novels again! Demon king this, demon king that. Reasons to read this novel: None Reasons not to read the novel: Aplenty I hereby rest my case

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Inferior
InferiorLv5

If you dont want to read it then dont. Why would you rate it if you havent even read it ? Have you gone through all the novels that you dont plan to read on this website and gave them a rating as well ???

ImmortalJohnnySins
ImmortalJohnnySinsLv14

What a cuck

khmeryin
khmeryinLv5

Honestly im into cuckolding too, nice fetish; but why you rating on something you haven’t even read? It not really a demon king novel, more like dungeon building with humorous gaming elements. At least it not a girly romance novel.

ImmortalJohnnySins
ImmortalJohnnySinsLv14

Exp

ImmortalJohnnySins
ImmortalJohnnySinsLv14

Hi

wryyyyy
wryyyyyLv5

Dude I think you're mistaking this novel for those pussies' novels.

DarkD
DarkDLv14

Perfect example of someone who shouldn't be allowed to review things. I can ignore it if you give some actual reason related to quality, but the only thing you did was say "the genre's not for me, 1-star".

_Creed_
_Creed_Lv5

Sherlie's a Superior Devil not a Demon....dweeb

JvIA
JvIALv6

This guy is pretty much a 0.

Bakat
BakatLv10

An example of a perfect retard.. Remember to advise your kids to not be like him

AsmodeusII
AsmodeusIILv4

lol bra, you barely read it.

Fantasmal
FantasmalLv5

BRUH

loopedchimp
loopedchimpLv11

He hasn't read any of it...

AsmodeusII:lol bra, you barely read it.
liqeye
liqeyeLv13

Actually it is hard to comment on a novel if you have to read it everytime first. Thats why synopsis is important. Its whats decides whether your story is interesting or even worth spending time reading. And im not saying this because i believe authora should slave away for readers. No. I say this because there is a million novels out there. And the only way to stand out is by showing how great your story is in the shortest time possible. Even if there are people who would dive in a novel before commenting on it or deciding to drop it they would still filter out things based on the introduction. For example if i see a introduction that sounded like a poetic literature i knew that it was going to be a the traditional Chinese s***. So i immediately skip to the next one on the search list. I hope authors would treat introductions seriously!!!

khmeryin:Honestly im into cuckolding too, nice fetish; but why you rating on something you haven’t even read? It not really a demon king novel, more like dungeon building with humorous gaming elements. At least it not a girly romance novel.
maikha_7039
maikha_7039Lv1

what's wrong man ? i know you happy because so manny people reply to this bullshit

Kritiko
KritikoLv10

I expected something from a 1* review only to see nonsense. get a life.

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ArchDenis
ArchDenisLv5

Hello everyone! This novel has some major flaws. In my opinion, the greatest flaw is unrealistic gamers and lots of small flaws due to that. List of core flaws: 1) I would like to notice that gamers are not playing closed beta. Closed beta is a paid job where people are testing everything to find bugs. Closed beta testers can not post anything or disclose any information. We can let it slide thou, there are different companies out there. Untested game capsules from unknown game company... aren't it insanely suspicious? 2) In this novel people are complaining about bugs which is quite strange. For example WOW has bugs after each new update (since vanilla till BFA ^^ ), which is common for such huge game, and people are complaining and insult developers *in beta* ... aren't it absurd? Same for servers maintance. 3) People are not worried about lack of feedback and support mechanisms (again it is BETA testing!) 4) People are offering money for in game currency. 4.1) Looking at insane prices, real testers would have submited a report and wait while all prices would have been reduced (like in most betas). 4.2) In all betas that I know, all beta progress stays in beta, and real game is real game. 4.3) It is BETA, you do not play it, you test a game. 5) It is BETA testing! Developers ask for beta testing, not players. Most gamers can not play for more then 2 hours per day, and even those who can, usually refuse to play unrefined games. So thousands beta requests is kinda... Basic minor flaws are from biology. Let us take for granted that goblin is equal in strenght to a common human male. If human mine ore, excavate stone, cut something, etc he get bruises and small cuts. Without gloves even tough skinned man can not really mine or drag something without inflicting self damage. And now let us remember that tools are rude and have no handle... So goblins are tough as hell (more like made from steel ^^ ) or Demon Lord heals them every 2-3 hours (or they will just bleed to death). I can continue, but this review is already far too long. Thank you for your time and have a great day!

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

I've read up to chapter 549. The story so far is entertaining. You have epic battles, a smart MC and an interesting plot that unfolds over time. However, there is a few deal breakers. There is a disgusting amount of misunderstandings in this fic. It gets to the point that its so unbelievable that it becomes another form of plot armor. Then we got reoccurring themes. Where a battle happens, the demons are losing until the MC and his immortal army swoops in. They then proceed to steal everything, get over whelming praise for their 'sacrifices', before the gamers start to ask everyone for a mysterious quest and the MC tells a sob story for cash. This repeats itself every freaking time no matter what small arc or scenario that occurs. And finally, the thing I hate the most is how in Beta version 1.0, they have 50million people joining. What happen to it being only 50thousand? The author forgot about what he said and goes into great detail on how only the chineses are allowed to play the game and the westerners are crying about the unfairness. The westerns tried to reverse engineer the gaming capsule but they couldn't do it. Now they have to sit at home and watch the glorious chinese having fun. 'Its kinda obvious what this is hinting too' Besides all these issues, this fic is a nice time sinker. It is above the other chinese fics and on par with the gamer fics from korea. Give it a try and you'll enjoy it. Now a few issues I have with the plot. First, all the gamers are naked savages. Second, there is no defined form of leadership/control over the gamers. Third, the MC doesn't recruit anybody to his dungeon to fight for him it is only the chaotic gamers. Fourth, there is alot of foreshadowing of the MC, but nothing is ever explained until the author just wants to add random stuff to his backstory on a whim. Finally, there is no character growth what so ever.

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