Review Detail of Webzayne in SAO: The New Kirito

Might as well balance out this review section. All these cucks spamming one-star reviews without writing anything worthwhile. I'll say that I have read the last few iterations of this novel. While I can't agree that rewriting it so many times is a good idea; at least you've shown improvement. That's more than what can be said for some authors. Good job, although I'd love to see something else done with this concept. Sao is a lackluster novel, that's been done to all hell. The one punch concept that you had before was better. Although the creation concept sort of broke the pacing. Once you overload a character so much, with possibilities; you cut all possible ******* for your story. This makes it harder to decide on a path, when you literally have infinite open. I would rewrite that, but allow the ability to have some limits, and growth potential. For example, he can only give himself abilities at the start of the world, and is limited for three or so. Make it so that he can't give himself information, allowing him to gain experience in his skill. Of course, he can create outside of his body or something so it isn't a totally useless wish. You just have to have limits with those kinds of abilities. I'd go for a pseudo-creation wish, with a library sort of information center with exorbitant information, and a wish that encompasses his body/form or bloodlines.