Review Detail of ZEROtheHERO2603 in SAO: The New Kirito

The quality of the writing is actually really good with little to no error at all. Not a lot of grammatical error or sentence structure that’s off and the story is easy to follow and read. I’m really happy with fact that the story doesn’t start off immediately with the launch of SAO and instead starts off much earlier as this allows more character growth and helps the reader be attached to the story and it’s character. The change of POV is a really good idea and one that should be continued as we get to more and more characters. The pace of the story is really good so far not being too fast or too slow and allow us get to know the characters much more. The lack of system in the story so far actually helps the story seem more natural and I think it could be a story on its own without the help of a system. I’m personally fine with the addition of the system as long as it doesn’t take over the story. Overall the story is great and I hope the author is able to continue and not be dispirited by the comments. It already suck that this is the third rewrite as I feel the others were already great. Hope this continues and that the author will get more recognition for his/her work